Re: [802SEC] PAR Review Rebuttal comments to 802.15.9ma and 802.15.22.13

I’ll pile on to Jon’s concern about the scope language. You already have KPMs, the scope doesn’t need to say you are going to consider new ones. That will be my report to 802.3 this afternoon recommending that it should be changed. I expect David will not be given a directed position by 802.3 so will be free to evaluate additional changes at the EC meeting.

—Bob Grow

On July 18, 2019 at 6:12 AM Jon Rosdahl <jrosdahl@ieee.org> wrote:

Hi Bob,

Thanks for responding to the 802.11 comments. We have some more items for consideration that we would like the group to consider prior to proceeding.

802.15.9ma – Disagree with the use of “considered” and believe “defined” is the appropriate word to use in a scope of a standard.

The Standard does not "consider" things. A Project may consider things during the course of the project, but the fine Standard will be defining or not the KMPs.

802.15.22.3 – Changes for the explanation are not clear if it is a replacement or an addition.

In looking at the PDF file, it is not clear if the edit to the explanation is a replacement or an addition. It is unfortunate that a new file was not created. with the corrections made. (either edit the PDF, or create a word version with the corrections that will need to be sent to the NesCom Administrator).

Kind Regards,

Jon

802.11 PAR Review Chair

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