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Re: [802SEC] Draft Press Release Review



Steve,

I think it would be better to have a reference to the prior standard (before revision) and list the changes in the revision.

Would it be accurate to make the following replacement?:
 The standard introduces the following: =>
 The revision introduces the following new features compared to the prior revision, IEEE 802.19.1-2014:

If so, then I think it would address my concern and improve the announcement.

Cheers,

Roger
On Sep 27, 2018, 9:58 AM -0600, Steve Shellhammer <sshellha@qti.qualcomm.com>, wrote:

EC,

 

                Attached is a revised version of the Press Release for publication of 802.19.1.

 

                Please tell me if you have any comments.

 

                If I do not get any comment for a few days I will start an email ballot.

 

Regards,

Steve

 


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