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Re: [802SEC] Updated P802.1CBcv PAR & CSD with 802.1 comment responses



Greetings,
   The 802.11 PAR Review SC has the following Rebuttal comments for consideration:

5 – PAR 6.1b – The citing of IEEE 802d requires that the full standard be listed in 8.1, as well as IEEE std. 802.  Also “RA” , “OID” and “URN” acronyms need to be spelled out on first usage as well.

6 – CSD 1.2.5 – In the beginning of the CSD, there is discussion of MIB and YANG models, but in the new text in 1.2.5, there seems to be a change to YANG and SNMP (transport of the MIB), should this section be referring to the impact of the MIB.  If Not, then you should also include a reference for SNMP.


Respectfully Submitted,
Jon
802.11 PAR Review SC Chair

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On Wed, Jul 12, 2017 at 8:57 AM, Glenn Parsons <glenn.parsons@ericsson.com> wrote:

Colleagues,

 

Comments on the PAR for P802.1CBcv - Amendment: Information Model, YANG Data Model and Management Information Base Module were received from 802.11 and 802.3.

 

The responses to the comment are here:

http://www.ieee802.org/1/files/public/docs2017/cv-PAR-CSD-comments-0717-v01.pdf

 

The PAR has been updated:

http://www.ieee802.org/1/files/public/docs2017/cv-draft-PAR-0517-v02.pdf

 

The CSD has been updated:

http://www.ieee802.org/1/files/public/docs2017/cv-draft-CSD-0517-v02.pdf

 

Cheers,

Glenn.

 

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