Re: [802SEC] IEEE 802.22.1 Advanced Beacon PAR Approval Press Release

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Dear All,

The attached press release has been modified based on Geoff' s comments below.

The purpose of this e-mail is not to conduct an EC e-mail ballot, but to seek your comments on this press release prior to the EC vote.

Deadline is Monday, Feb. 18th 5.00 pm, Eastern Time.

Thanks

Mody

From: apurva mody <apurva_mody@yahoo.com>
To: "thompson@ieee.org" <thompson@ieee.org>; "STDS-802-SEC@LISTSERV.IEEE.ORG" <STDS-802-SEC@LISTSERV.IEEE.ORG>; Vivian Kelly Interprosper <viviankelly@interprosepr.com>; Shuang Yu_IEEE_SA <Shuang.Yu@ieee.org>
Sent: Tuesday, February 12, 2013 2:37 PM
Subject: :-): [802SEC] IEEE 802.22.1 Advanced Beacon PAR Approval Press Release

Geoff,

Thanks for your quick feedback.
We will re-arrange the press release as you have suggested below.

Apurva

P. S. I assume that John and Michael will maintain their Approve vote during the actual EC motion. :-)

From: Geoff Thompson <thompson@ieee.org>
To: STDS-802-SEC@LISTSERV.IEEE.ORG
Sent: Tuesday, February 12, 2013 2:01 PM
Subject: Re: [802SEC] IEEE 802.22.1 Advanced Beacon PAR Approval Press Release

Apurva-

I don't think this release will serve your purposes.
It takes until line 28 before a reader hits any words that are of interest to our constituency.
By that time the target editors will have already decided that they are not interested in what seems to be the core subject of:
    spectrum of "existing radars and 15 fixed satellite earth stations"

Boring !!

You need to LEAD OFF with what's important, new bands and new capacity have been opened up for consumers to use and 802 is doing something about it.

Something like:    "IEEE 802 launches new standards project to bring newly available spectrum to consumer fixed and mobile wireless broadband"

Please rewite and try again.

Best regards,

    Geoff

On 122//13 10:36 AM, Mody, Apurva (US SSA) wrote:

Dear EC Members,

Please review the attached Draft Press Release on approval of the IEEE 802.22.1 Advanced Beaconing revision project by the IEEE SA NESCOM.

The press release has been reviewed by the IEEE Staff and received approval from the 802.22 WG.

Please provide your comments by Monday, Feb 18th CoB at which point I would like to start a 10 Day EC E-mail ballot to get the press release approved.

Thanks

Mody

Apurva N. Mody, Ph. D.

Chair, IEEE 802.22 Working Group on Wireless Regional Area Networks (www.ieee802.org/22)

Mobile: (404)819-0314

E-mail: apurva.mody@ieee.org

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