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Re: [802SEC] IEEE 802.22.1 Advanced Beacon PAR Approval Press Release

Apurva-

I don't think this release will serve your purposes.
It takes until line 28 before a reader hits any words that are of interest to our constituency.
By that time the target editors will have already decided that they are not interested in what seems to be the core subject of:
    spectrum of "existing radars and 15 fixed satellite earth stations"

Boring !!

You need to LEAD OFF with what's important, new bands and new capacity have been opened up for consumers to use and 802 is doing something about it.

Something like:    "IEEE 802 launches new standards project to bring newly available spectrum to  consumer fixed and mobile wireless broadband"

Please rewite and try again.

Best regards,

    Geoff

On 122//13 10:36 AM, Mody, Apurva (US SSA) wrote:
Dear EC Members,
 
Please review the attached Draft Press Release on approval of the IEEE 802.22.1 Advanced Beaconing revision project by the IEEE SA NESCOM.
 
The press release has been reviewed by the IEEE Staff and received approval from the 802.22 WG.
 
Please provide your comments by Monday, Feb 18th CoB at which point I  would like to start a 10 Day EC E-mail ballot to get the press release approved.
 
Thanks
 
Mody
 
Apurva N. Mody, Ph. D.
 
Chair, IEEE 802.22 Working Group on Wireless Regional Area Networks (www.ieee802.org/22)
Mobile: (404)819-0314
 
 
 
 
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