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Hello Dorothy,Thank you very much for your comments and I accepted all of them. Enclosed is the latest draft that includes the edits from you and Roger. I will post revision 4 to the mentor prior to the EC meeting on 4 October 2022.Regards,
EdwardOn Mon, Oct 3, 2022 at 11:30 AM Stanley, Dorothy <dorothy.stanley@hpe.com> wrote:Hello Edward,
Some additional suggested edits are below.
Thanks,
Dorothy=================
- First paragraph, delete "The Consultation is an important mechanism for soliciting feedback that will
provide Nkcom with the information necessary." Not necessary.- UWB comments: delete "strongly". We support. Would we weakly support something?
EEE 802 LMSC are supportive both of Nkom’s proposal to mirror in national legislation EC’s
implementing decision 2022/179/EU (ECC/DEC/(08)04 of 2 July 2021) with respect to use of wireless systems, including WAS/RLAN, in the 5 GHz bands.================
- In the conclusion, change "for providing this invaluable opportunity to provide this submission" to "for the opportunity to provide this submission"
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Subject: Re: [802SEC] Review of an 802 submission to Norway Nkom's consultation before proceeding to a motionHello Roger,
Thanks for your review and comments! Enclosed please find a temp draft (as revision 3a that will be uploaded to revision 4) that replaces "Nkcom" with "Nkom", "EEE" with "IEEE", and fixes the font consistency throughout the draft.
Regards,
Edward
On Sat, Oct 1, 2022 at 12:01 PM Roger Marks <r.b.marks@ieee.org> wrote:
Edward,
It seems that proofreading is in order.
There are 6 instance of Nkom and 4 of Nkcom. Both seem to refer to the recipient. I suppose that only one is correct.
In the references, “EEE” should be “IEEE”, and I recommend font consistency.
Cheers,
RogerOn Sep 30, 2022, 10:03 AM -0600, Edward Au <edward.ks.au@gmail.com>, wrote:
Dear EC members,
I would like to request the review of an IEEE 802 submission to Norway Nkom's consultation “Public consultation - proposal for regulations on the amendment of the free use regulations” before proceeding to a motion. Please kindly provide comments on the draft blog available at <https://mentor.ieee.org/802.18/dcn/22/18-22-0120-03-0000-contribution-for-nkcom-consultation.pdf> by Monday 3 October 2022 A.O.E.
Thanks and Regards,
Edward
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