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Edward,
I had unexpected time to further review this.
I would like to change my vote to approve with a suggested editorial –
In the second to last paragraph on the first page is the following sentence –
Without doubt, current and next generations of WAS/RLAN technology based on IEEE Std. 802.11ax-2021 [3] and IEEE 802.11be [4] will play a critical role in achieving “Excellent and secure connectivity for everybody and everywhere in Europe,” which “is a prerequisite for a society in which every business and citizen can fully participate” [2].
I think this could be better worded so IEEE 802 doesn’t sound so sure of itself. Something like
Current and next generations of WAS/RLAN technology based on IEEE Std. 802.11ax-2021 [3] and IEEE 802.11be [4] are expected to play a critical role in achieving “Excellent and secure connectivity for everybody and everywhere in Europe,” which “is a prerequisite for a society in which every business and citizen can fully participate” [2].
Also – are references typically included in the body of the text or after the signature?
John
From: jdambrosia@gmail.com <jdambrosia@gmail.com>
Sent: Tuesday, August 9, 2022 8:55 AM
To: 'Edward Au' <edward.ks.au@gmail.com>; STDS-802-SEC@LISTSERV.IEEE.ORG
Subject: RE: Dear John // Fwd: +++10-day EC Motion+++ Approval of submission for European Commission RSPG’s consultation “Opinion on the ITU-R World Radiocommunication Conference 2023”
abstain
From: Edward Au <edward.ks.au@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, Jul 29, 2022 at 12:18 PM
Subject: +++10-day EC Motion+++ Approval of submission for European Commission RSPG’s consultation “Opinion on the ITU-R World Radiocommunication Conference 2023”
To: STDS-802-SEC@LISTSERV.IEEE.ORG <STDS-802-SEC@listserv.ieee.org>
Dear EC members,With this email I would like to announce the start of an LMSC (EC) ballot on a submission to European Commission Radio Spectrum Policy Group (RSPG) in response to the consultation “Opinion on the ITU-R World Radiocommunication Conference 2023”.
Paul has delegated to me to conduct a LMSC (EC) 10-day electronic ballot on the motion below to approve the comments to the ITU-R Working Party 5A. This EC motion is per IEEE 802 OM 7.2.1 Procedure, P&P 7.1 b) (majority response) and P&P 7.1.2 (2/3 approval of votes cast) for communication with government bodies and public statements. With that we would like to see everyone respond.
Move to approve document https://mentor.ieee.org/802.18/dcn/22/18-22-0077-08-0000-proposed-response-to-rspg.docx for submission to the European Commission Radio Spectrum Policy Group’s consultation “Opinion on the ITU-R World Radiocommunication Conference 2023”, with editorial license granted to the 802.18 chair.
- Approved in the RR-TAG: _13_ / _0_ / _5_ (The Chair did not vote)
Mover: Edward AuSeconder: Dorothy Stanley
Start of ballot: 29 July 2022
Close of ballot: 7 August 2022
Reference document
Information on the public consultation: https://rspg-spectrum.eu/wp-content/uploads/2022/06/RSPG22-014final-Draft_RSPG_Opinion_WRC23.pdf
- Current deadline for comment submission: 12 August 2022
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