It makes me wonder, a "Holistic Architectual Approach" to what? Reading the scope of the approved project it is hard to imagine how this title relates to the scope of the IEEE P802.3df PAR.
The use of "Holistic" though works very well as a hook - I'm intrigued and will surely read the blog if I can find it! It would be a shame if I came away from the experience thinking I'd been fooled into it by a misleading title.
Just a suggestion FWIW.
Ben
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David - I have one minor comment -
The text of the blog is fine, and is all forward looking. However, the headline reads like it is announcing a milestone that has been done. Perhaps instead of “ IEEE P802.3dfTM Defines a Holistic Architectural Approach” we should say “ IEEE P802.3dfTM to Define a Holistic Architectural Approach” so that the headline reflects the forward-looking nature of the work.
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> Dear EC members,
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> Based on the approval of the IEEE P802.3df 200 Gb/s, 400 Gb/s, 800 Gb/s, and 1.6 Tb/s Ethernet PAR during the recent IEEE-SA Standards Board meeting, I've arranged for the development of the Beyond Standards blog post. The draft blog post is available at <https://mentor.ieee.org/802-ec/dcn/21/ec-21-0314-00-00EC-ieee-p802-3df-beyond-standards-blog-post.pdf>. Since the development of this blog post was at the request of the Task Force Chair and myself, I'll be seeking IEEE 802 EC approval of the blog post during the Tuesday 4 January 2022 IEEE 802 EC teleconference.
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> I would like to request a review prior to the IEEE 802 EC teleconference, therefore please provide comments on the draft blog post by Wednesday 29 December 2021 11:59 PM AOE.
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> Thanks and best regards,
> David
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The text of the blog is fine, and is all forward looking. However, the headline reads like it is announcing a milestone that has been done. Perhaps instead of “ IEEE P802.3dfTM Defines a Holistic Architectural Approach” we should say “ IEEE P802.3dfTM to Define a Holistic Architectural Approach” so that the headline reflects the forward-looking nature of the work.
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> On Dec 21, 2021, at 6:31 AM, Law, David <dlaw@hpe.com> wrote:
>
> Dear EC members,
>
> Based on the approval of the IEEE P802.3df 200 Gb/s, 400 Gb/s, 800 Gb/s, and 1.6 Tb/s Ethernet PAR during the recent IEEE-SA Standards Board meeting, I've arranged for the development of the Beyond Standards blog post. The draft blog post is available at <https://mentor.ieee.org/802-ec/dcn/21/ec-21-0314-00-00EC-ieee-p802-3df-beyond-standards-blog-post.pdf>. Since the development of this blog post was at the request of the Task Force Chair and myself, I'll be seeking IEEE 802 EC approval of the blog post during the Tuesday 4 January 2022 IEEE 802 EC teleconference.
>
> I would like to request a review prior to the IEEE 802 EC teleconference, therefore please provide comments on the draft blog post by Wednesday 29 December 2021 11:59 PM AOE.
>
> Thanks and best regards,
> David
>
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