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Re: [802SEC] Lack of response for comments sent on 802.15.3ma PAR

Thanks for the summaries.
Without them I would not know your changes from 15-21/627, as I don't see them there.
We pulled up the PAR document from the 802 EC Agenda, and reviewed the proposed changes tagged in the document.
As Noted in our report, we applaud the changes.
The Concern in 8.1 is that the text box is larger than the page, and we wanted to remind you to ensure all the changes are made, and not cut off at the view point.
Regards,
Jon
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 IEEE 802 Executive Secretary   Qualcomm Technologies, Inc.
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On Thu, Nov 18, 2021 at 9:08 AM Pat Kinney <patrickinney@gmail.com> wrote:
Jon;

1) I believed that we had sent you the responses to your comments in document https://mentor.ieee.org/802.15/dcn/21/15-21-0627-00-0000-nov-2021-closing-report-for-802-15.pptx.  I include the summaries here for your review.

802.11: "...the title should be considered to be updated to include the range that the revision will cover.”
802.15: “...We remove “High Data Rate” from the title.”


802.11: "Properly cite “802.15.3d, 802.15.3e and 80.15.3f” “
802.15: "In response to your comments, we have made the edits to 5.5”

802.11: “...list the full Standard name for those standards cited in the PAR:”
802.15: "we have made the edits to 8.1”

2) Finally, why your concern?  The PAR cited in the request for EC approval has been edited to show the changes, however it will be properly edited by the NesCom administrator.

Pat Kinney



On 18, Nov2021, at 8:59, Jon Rosdahl <jrosdahl@IEEE.ORG> wrote:

From the 802.11 PAR Review SC to 802.15:
1.We did not get a comment response by the deadline of Nov 17 AOE.
a. The response should have been sent to the stds-802-sec reflector in a timely manner.
2.We applaud the changes we see being requested on the pdf file sent to the 802 EC, but we are concerned that the items in 8.1 run past the page.

The full report is given in doc 11-21/1627r2:
https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/21/11-21-1627-02-0PAR-par-review-sc-meeting-agenda-and-comment-slides-nov-2021-electronic-plenary.pptx

Respectfully submitted,
Jon
IEEE 802.11 PAR Review SC Chair.

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Jon Rosdahl                             Engineer, Senior Staff
 IEEE 802 Executive Secretary   Qualcomm Technologies, Inc.
office: 801-492-4023                  10871 North 5750 West
cell:   801-376-6435                   Highland, UT 84003

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A Family is necessary to be happy!!

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