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[802SEC] 2021 March 802 Electronic Plenary PAR Feedback - 802.1ASdr

Greetings,
   The 802.11 PAR Review SC met and has the following comments for 802.1ASdr:

PAR

8.1 – instructions indicate that the section number is to be indicated.

8.1 The footnote that is indicated is confusing. If the footnote should be included In the PAR? Is the footnote for the title or the sentence?

5.5 The first use of PTP should be spelled out for the acronym (not just in 8.1).

CSD

1.2.1 g) Is this a true statement “ This project avoids non-inclusive, insensitive…”, or are you really “This project modifies some existing terms in the existing standard.…”


Regards,
Jon Rosdahl
802.11 PAR Review SC Chair
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