James,
James,
Thanks very much for these improvements, which have been incorporated in full. Please check to see if you still want to pull it from the consent agenda. The new version is here: http://www.ieee802.org/1/files/public/docs2019/802e-par-extension-request-0719-v2.pdf. The WG will vote on this at the 802.1 closing plenary on Thursday afternoon.
Regards,
-- John
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From: James P. K. Gilb <Gilb_IEEE@yahoo.com>
Sent: 17 July 2019 11:23
To: John Messenger <jmessenger@advaoptical.com>; STDS-802-SEC@LISTSERV.IEEE.ORG
Subject: Re: [802SEC] PAR Extension Request for P802E under 48-hour rule
External email: [Gilb_IEEE@yahoo.com]
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John
I would like to see the following changes to the PAR extension:
1) It is Standards Association ballot, not Sponsor ballot.
2) I don't think it helps any to say why you are not finished. RevCom simply wants to make sure that you are making progress and have a good chance to finish within the requested extension.
3) From NesCom's point of view, the WG meets 6 times a year. I know that officially, the interim meetings are not official WG meetings for 802.1, but I would answer that question with a 6.
4) You should have 6 months between Sponsor ballot start and RevCom submission, so I would suggest changing it to July 2020
Editorials
1) It seems some extra cr/lfs have been pasted in instead of allowing the paragraph to flow, likely due to pasting in from another document.
2) "92% Approve. 2 Disapprove votes." are not complete sentences, please change to "The draft has passed Working Group ballot with 92% approval rate." There is no need to list the number of disapprove voters. The text "(including votes from other group's participants)" is very likely to elicit NesCom comments ("who are the other groups?" and is not relevant to the vote result.
For number 2), I would suggest the following text:
"The draft has passed Working Group ballot with 92% approval rate. The group expects to complete Working Group balloting by November of 2019 so that Standards Association ballot can begin in January, 2020. Thus the Working Group needs an extension to finish Standards Association ballot and submit to RevCom."
It seem unlikely that this will be completed by 1 pm, so I will be asking to pull this from the consent agenda.
James Gilb
On 7/17/19 1:01 AM, John Messenger wrote:
Colleagues:
With Paul's permission, I plan to include forwarding of this PAR Extension request on the consent agenda for the closing LMSC plenary on Friday:
http://www.ieee802.org/1/files/public/docs2019/802e-par-extension-requ
est-0719-v1.pdf This will be presented under the 48-hour rule of the
LMSC OM clause 9.2.
Regards,
-- John
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John Messenger
Acting Chair, IEEE P802.1 WG
Director, Global Standards
ADVA Optical Networking Ltd
ADVAntage Houe, Tribune Way, York YO30 4TN, UK
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