Re: [802SEC] 802.1 PARs - comment responses

[James Gilb <000008e8b69871c2-dmarc-request@ieee.org>]

Glenn

Comments below.

On 03/07/2018 10:49 AM, Glenn Parsons wrote:
> Colleagues,
>
> Based on comments received, the response and update of the remaining 802.1 PARs and CSDs are noted below:
>
> P60802 - Standard:  Time-Sensitive Networking Profile for Industrial Automation response to comments:
> http://www.ieee802.org/1/files/public/docs2018/60802-PAR-CSD-comments-0318-v01.pdf
> updated PAR:

The title of 802.1AS is incorrect.  Please use the full title.  Plus, 
there is a typo as it says 802.AS

> http://www.ieee802.org/1/files/public/docs2018/60802-PAR-0318-v01.pdf
> CSD: http://www.ieee802.org/1/files/public/docs2018/60802-CSD-0318-v01.pdf
>
> P802.1CBcv - Amendment: Information Model, YANG Data Model and Management Information Base Module response to comments:
> http://ieee802.org/1/files/public/docs2018/cv-PAR-CSD-comments-0318-v01.pdf
> updated PAR:
> http://www.ieee802.org/1/files/public/docs2018/cv-PAR-0318-v01.pdf
> updated CSD:
> http://www.ieee802.org/1/files/public/docs2018/cv-CSD-0318-v01.pdf
>
> 802.1CBdb -  Amendment: Extended Stream Identification Functions response to comments:
> http://ieee802.org/1/files/public/docs2018/db-PAR-CSD-comments-0318-v01.pdf
> updated PAR:
> http://www.ieee802.org/1/files/public/docs2018/db-PAR-0318-v01.pdf
> CSD: http://www.ieee802.org/1/files/public/docs2018/db-CSD-0318-v01.pdf
>
> 802.1DC - Standard for Quality of Service Provision by Network Systems response to comments:
> http://ieee802.org/1/files/public/docs2018/dc-PAR-CSD-comments-0318-v01.pdf
> updated PAR:
> http://www.ieee802.org/1/files/public/docs2018/dc-PAR-0318-v01.pdf
> updated CSD:
> http://www.ieee802.org/1/files/public/docs2018/dc-CSD-0318-v01.pdf

The titles of IEEE Std 802.1Q and IEEE P802.1Q-Rev incorrect.  Please 
use the full title.

AFAIK, you only need to have the full title once in section 8.1, you 
don't need to list it for every section in which it is used.
> Cheers,
> Glenn.
>
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