While preparing to send this document to our ITU-R Liaison I discovered that some of your edits are not appropriate. See the embedded notes.
Director, Global Spectrum Strategy
Board Director, Dynamic Spectrum Alliance
Chair, IEEE 802.18 Radio Regulatory Technical Advisory Group
Chair Emeritus, IEEE 802.11af WLAN in TVWS
Chair, Wi-Fi Alliance Spectrum & Regulatory Task Group
I vote approve with the following editorial suggestions:
"1 Mbps" should be "1 Mb/s" according to SI-10 (three locations on page 5) This is the original ITU-R text,
to which we are adding our edits. It would not be appropriate for us to change.
"IMC" on page 5 is used, but the acronym has not been previously expanded. This is the original ITU-R text,
to which we are adding our edits. It would not be appropriate for us to change.
Page 6: "backhauling" is likely not a word. I would think "backhaul"
would be appropriate in this location. This is the original ITU-R text, to which we are adding our edits.
It would not be appropriate for us to change.
Page 7: I think the reference for 802.15.7 should be:
IEEE Std 802.15.7-2011, IEEE Standard for Local and Metropolitan Area Networks--Part 15.7: Short-Range Wireless Optical Communication Using Visible Light
(also, no quotes around the title when referring to it earlier) This is the original ITU-R text, to which
we are adding our edits. It would not be appropriate for us to change.
Page 7: Bibliography item [7] is a repeat of item [3]. I don't think you need both, so I would suggest deleting [7]. Deleted.
On 05/22/2017 10:21 AM, Kennedy, Rich wrote:
> It appears that I neglected to add this phrase: With this e-mail, I'd like to announce the start of the ballot.
> Last week at the IEEE 802 Wireless Interim in Daejeon, we approved a contribution to ITU-R towards a PRELIMINARY Draft New Report ITU-R SM.[Visible-Light]. It was created
by Nikola Serafimovski, and edited (in great detail) by Roger Marks.
> This needs to be voted by the EC and transmitted by May 30th. Please review. I would like to start the ballot this week
> Paul has delegated the conduct of the EC electronic ballot on the following motion to me.
> MOTION: To approve, under the "Procedure for communication with
> government bodies," the release to ITU-R Working Party 1A of the
> content of the draft contribution in
> I am the mover, and Roger Marks has offered to second.
> ribution-to-itu-r-wp-1a-comment-on-working-document-towards-a-prelimin
> ary-draft-new-report-itu-r-sm-visible-light.docx
> sion-of-itu-r-wp-1a-comment-on-working-document-towards-a-preliminary-
> draft-new-report-itu-r-sm-visible-light.docx
> Director, Global Spectrum Strategy
> Board Director, Dynamic Spectrum Alliance Chair, IEEE 802.18 Radio
> Regulatory Technical Advisory Group Chair Emeritus, IEEE 802.11af WLAN
> in TVWS Chair, Wi-Fi Alliance Spectrum & Regulatory Task Group
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