Folks,
The updated P802.1ARce PAR is now at:
http://www.ieee802.org/1/files/public/docs2014/ce-draft-arce-par-0714-v3.pdf
The CSD, which has not been changed, can be found at:
http://www.ieee802.org/1/files/public/docs2014/ce-draft-arce-csd-0514-v2.pdf
Comments, responses, and proposed changes to the pre-circulated P802.1ARce PAR text follow.
P802.1ARce PAR comment resolution
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1 comment was received from an 802.3 member (forwarded by David Law) and 1 comment from 802.11.
The 802.11 comment was:
Expand Acronyms for first usage in Scope/Title/Purpose. “SHA-384, P-384, ECDSA .
Response:
"SHA" stands for Secure Hash Algorithm but the name of the algorithm being referenced is "SHA-384" not Secure Hash Algorithm 384, the latter would be incorrect and regarded as an error by the intended users of this standard. Similarly P-384 is the name of an
elliptic curve, and in this case has no expansion. The title should remain unchanged.
In 5.2.b "Scope of the project" replace "use of SHA-384" with "use of the secure hash algorithm SHA-384".
In 5.2.b "Scope of the project" replace "ECDSA" with "Elliptic Curve Digital Signature Algorithm (ECDSA)" . Note it is important to retain the acronym here since the full form is so rarely used by those familiar with the technology.
The 802.3 member comment was:
"The language is quite terse, and somewhat baffling to one not active in cybersecurity. This potentially causes problems with NesCom members. I would note that 5.5 Need certainly falls into the category of obscurity through being terse.
Response (after working with the 802.3 member making the comment):
Revise the initial sentence of need. Replace "There is significant broad interest in the use of SHA-384 and P-384 elliptic curve, for example" with
"The cybersecurity community wants to take advantage of recent improvements in cryptographic technology to use a stronger digital signature algorithm with IEEE Std 802.1AR, and in particular to use SHA-384 and the P-384 elliptic curve "
Cheers,
Glenn.
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Glenn Parsons - Chair, IEEE 802.1
glenn.parsons@ericsson.com
+1-613-963-8141
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