Hi Apurva,
IEEE 802.18 has the following comments on the 802.22 PAR and CSD.
Regards,
Mike
From: Holcomb, Jay [mailto:Jay.Holcomb@itron.com]
Sent: Tuesday, July 15, 2014 1:07 PM
To: Michael Lynch
Subject: the one PAR/CSD with 802.18 inputs
hi Mike,
it was just the 802.22 PAR we had some suggestions:
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For the 802.22.3 PAR:
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For the PAR: We suggest to delete the phrase “creation of low cost sensors for”. in the following line. Low cost would be vendor sensitive.
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From: “5.5 Need for the Project:
This project will enable creation of low cost sensors for improved spectrum utilization and other shared spectrum applications.”
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To: “5.5 Need for the Project:
This project will enable improved spectrum utilization and other shared spectrum applications.”
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For the CSD we have a couple of suggestions:
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In 1.2.3 a)
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b. IEEE P1900.6a, should not have the ‘P’, should say “ b. IEEE 1900.6a…
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Also further down in paragraph 3, the same.
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“… emerging P1900.6a Standard.”
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should read: “… emerging 1900.6a Standard.”
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In 1.2.4 a) we suggest the term “Companies” be changed to “Organizations” when referring to NICT, ETRI, etc.
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Also in 1.2.4.a) the paragraph starting with:
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“Systems simiar to the proposed SOS has been…”
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should read: “Systems similar to the proposed SOS have been…”
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In 1.2.5 a), the first line should remove ‘low cost’ to be consistent with comment above.
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From: “This standard aims at creating economies of scale through uniform and consistent operation of low cost spectrum sensors.”
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To: “This standard aims at creating economies of scale through uniform and consistent operation of spectrum sensors.”
Regards,
Jay Holcomb
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