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That would be great,
Jon
----- Original Message -----
Sent: Tuesday, March 19, 2013 1:37
PM
Subject: Re: [802SEC] Response to
Comments from 802.11 on the 154p title PAR
Jon
Obviously I did not understand what you were trying
to convey with your original comment. I thought you were talking about what
was contained in Section 2.1. Now that I do understand your comment, it
is most reasonable and we will add to 8.1 the sentence: Title is being
changed to more clearly reflect and communicate the intended use of the
standard.
Thanks
Bob
At 05:40 PM 3/18/2013
-0600, Jon Rosdahl wrote:
Hi
Bob,
I understand that MyProject
auto-completes, but the instructions for a Modified PAR is to include in 8.1
the reason for the change..
Please
consider adding a statement for what/why a change was
made...
From the PAR
instructions:
To modify a PAR you
will need to explain the changes you are making, you cannot modify a PAR
without doing this
from NesCom
Conventions and Guidelines:
13. Modified
PARs
a. All modified PARs shall include an indication of all changes
that are part of the request under "Additional Explanatory Notes" of the PAR
form.
I would suggest that if you feel
that the auto-fill text in 8.1 is relevant then leave it, but at the very
least you should include a statement that is required for the PAR
Modification explaining what is changing and why.
Regards,
Jon
----- Original Message -----
From: Bob Heile
To: STDS-802-SEC@LISTSERV.IEEE.ORG
Sent: Monday, March 18, 2013 6:01 PM
Subject: Re:
[802SEC] Response to Comments from 802.11 on the 154p title
PAR
Jon
Thanks for the comment on the 15.4p title change:
- 8.1 should only include a statement of what is being changed.
i.e. 2.1 Change Title to better communicate what features are in the
standard .
- Or something similar.
This was a MyProject auto
complete and not something that we had control over. All I entered was the
new title and this is the doc that got generated by the
system.
Regards
Bob
At 03:52 PM 3/18/2013 -0600, Jon
Rosdahl wrote:
Hello
WG Chairs!!!
802.11 Has feedback for each of the
following PARs:
802
- Standard for Local and Metropolitan Area Networks: Overview and
Architecture
802.1Qcb - amendment for Frame Replication and Elimination for
Reliability -
802.3bm - PAR
modification Request
802.3bq -
amendment for 40GBASE-T,
802.15.4p - PAR
modification Request
802.21c - PAR Extension
Please see feedback as contained in 802.11
doc: 11-13/0333r0:
- https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/13/11-13-0333-00-0000-802-11-review-of-march-proposed-pars.pptx
Regards,
Jon
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