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Hi Bob,
I understand that MyProject auto-completes,
but the instructions for a Modified PAR is to include in 8.1 the reason for the
change..
Please consider adding a statement for what/why a
change was made...
From the PAR instructions:
To modify a PAR you will need to explain the changes you are making, you
cannot modify a PAR without doing this
from NesCom Conventions and
Guidelines:
13. Modified PARs
a. All modified PARs shall include an
indication of all changes that are part of the request under "Additional
Explanatory Notes" of the PAR form.
I would suggest that if you feel that the auto-fill
text in 8.1 is relevant then leave it, but at the very least you should include
a statement that is required for the PAR Modification explaining what is
changing and why.
Regards,
Jon
----- Original Message -----
Sent: Monday, March 18, 2013 6:01
PM
Subject: Re: [802SEC] Response to
Comments from 802.11 on the 154p title PAR
Jon
Thanks for the comment on the 15.4p title change:
- 8.1 should only include a statement of what is being changed. i.e.
2.1 Change Title to better communicate what features are in the standard
.
- Or something similar.
This was a MyProject auto
complete and not something that we had control over. All I entered was the new
title and this is the doc that got generated by the
system.
Regards
Bob
At 03:52 PM 3/18/2013 -0600, Jon
Rosdahl wrote:
Hello WG
Chairs!!!
802.11 Has feedback for each of the
following PARs:
802 -
Standard for Local and Metropolitan Area Networks: Overview and
Architecture
802.1Qcb - amendment for Frame Replication and Elimination for Reliability -
802.3bm - PAR
modification Request
802.3bq - amendment
for 40GBASE-T,
802.15.4p - PAR
modification Request
802.21c
- PAR Extension
Please see feedback as contained in 802.11 doc:
11-13/0333r0:
- https://mentor.ieee.org/802.11/dcn/13/11-13-0333-00-0000-802-11-review-of-march-proposed-pars.pptx
Regards,
Jon
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