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All I agree with all of Geoff comments, with the following exceptions:is/will - I don't have a preference here, Geoff has a point that since this is an announcement, future tense would seem to make more sense. However, it is clear that the group has already started work.
"... greater market adoption. We believe ..." does not need an open quote in front of "We" as both sentences are part of a single quote, which starts on the first line.
Final comment: I think it is fine to say that the SG is targeting a solution or path. This is simply reducing its scope to something manageable. I don't think you need a change to the quote there.
David: Will you be posting a new version before Monday? James Gilb On 10/26/2011 04:09 PM, Geoff Thompson wrote:
David/Dan- Enclosed is a marked up version of the PDF with my comments. Geoff On 2610//11 1:25 AM, Law, David wrote:Dear EC members, I have arranged for the development of the attached press release to announce the formation of the IEEE 802.3 Next Generation 100 Gb/s Optical Ethernet Study Group that was chartered at the last plenary. Since the development of this press release was at the request of the Study Group Chair and myself I'm seeking EC approval. I will seek this approval at the opening IEEE 802 EC plenary on Monday 7th November and I'm going to request that this be placed on the consent agenda. Based on this I would like to request comments on the attached draft. Thanks and best regards, David ---------- This email is sent from the 802 Executive Committee email reflector. This list is maintained by Listserv.---------- This email is sent from the 802 Executive Committee email reflector. This list is maintained by Listserv.
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