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Re: [802SEC] UPDATE to Call for Comments on 802.23 draft



Geoff -

My comments attached.

Regards,
Tony


On 13 June 2011 21:42, Geoff Thompson <thompson@ieee.org> wrote:

> Colleagues-
>
> Roger Marks has very kindly granted permission to 802.23 to use the more
> up-to-date version of his 802.16 "Commentary" balloting tool.
>        Ref: http://dot16.org/Commentary/
> If you have already downloaded the tool, please delete it and download
> Commentary 2.  If you have already generated some comments in the older
> tool, please close out those and send them to me now and do the remainder of
> your commenting in Commentary 2.
> I have edited the message below (sent last night) to reflect this new
> information.
>
> To comment open the .cmt file, select the "Personalize" option & fill in
> Then select the "Comment" option and start your comments.
>        Thanks, Geoff
> =================================================
> In my last e-mail to you (attached below) I announced the availability of
> the first public version of the 802.23 draft.  In that e-mail, I said that I
> would formally solicit comments to be considered and incorporated into the
> draft at our next meetings during the 802 Plenary Week in San Franciso the
> week of July 17.
>
> Please review the draft and record your comments using the 802.16
> commenting tool, "Commentary 2".
> The tool does allow you to accumulate comments over multiple review
> sessions.
> Commentary is a standalone application that has both MAC and PC versions.
> Downloadable files are available at:
>    http://dot16.org/Commentary/
>
> Please use "802.23 Ballot 1" as the fill-in for the field labeled "Letter
> Ballot Number or Ballot Code"
> Please mail the resulting comment file to me at:
>    thompson@ieee.org
> With the subject line:
>    Comments on 802.23/D0.9
> This is a 30 day comment period so please get your comments to me by
> midnight, July 13 AoE
> I will bring the assembled comments to the meeting
> Comments are welcome from any interested or materially interested party.
>
> If you have any question please get in touch with me directly
> Best regards,
>    Geoff Thompson, 802.23 WG Chair
>
> =========================================
> Subject:     802.23 Initial Public draft posted
> Date:     Tue, 24 May 2011 14:11:00 -0700
> From:     Geoff Thompson <thompson@ieee.org>
> Reply-To:     thompson@ieee.org
> To:     802-23 Emergency Services <
> STDS-802-23-emergencyservices@LISTSERV.IEEE.ORG>
> CC:     802 EC <stds-802-sec@IEEE.ORG>
>
> Colleagues-
>
> I am happy to report that 802.23 had a successful meeting in King of
> Prussia, PA.  Although we did not have any more attending the meeting
> than normal, we had a very productive meeting with the help of Richard
> Barnes who helped shake out out concepts with respect to operation and
> inter-layer relationships.  We reviewed my initial cut at a draft and
> refined and simplified our concepts.  In the time since the meeting we
> have generated a new version of the draft which we are making available
> for public review.
>
> The draft is available at the following URL:
>
>
> https://mentor.ieee.org/802.23/dcn/11/23-11-0013-00-ESWG-draft-p802dot23-d0pt9-pdf-es-wg-draft.pdf
> or alternatively at:
>    http://tinyurl.com/3lo9bc6
> You may also retrieve the draft by going to the 802.23 document site
> https://mentor.ieee.org/802.23/documents
> and selecting [Download] for 2011 DCN 13
>
> Geoff
>
> We are happy to accept comments from all interested parties as Observer
> comments.  All comments will be considered.
> I would appreciate your review.
>
> I expect to post commenting tools and ask for formally submitted
> comments to be submitted for review at our Working Group meeting
> (Tues/Wed/Thurs AM) at the next 802 Plenary in San Francisco.
>    http://ieee802.facetoface-events.com/session/70/page/index/id/index
>    http://ieee802.facetoface-events.com/files/sessions/70/announcement.pdf
>
> Best regards,
>
>    Geoff
>
> Geoffrey O. Thompson
> Chair, IEEE 802.23 Emergency Services Working Group
>
> GraCaSI Standards Advisors
> 158 Paseo Ct.
> Mountain View, CA 94043-5286
> <thompson@ieee.org>
>
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