[802SEC] 802.1Qbh PAR comments
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Section 5.2 Scope
The scope uses text that speaks of the future, yet the scope will go
into the finished standard and so should be written as past tense.
Accordingly, I suggest the following changes:
Change "is envisioned to support" to be "has been added to support"
Change "It is expected that this amendment will result in the definition
of a new device (a Port Extender) and optional augmentation ..." to be
"This amendment has defined a new device, a Port Extender, and optional
augmentation ..."
Thanks
James Gilb
IEEE 802 LMSC Recording Secretary
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