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[802SEC] Comments from 802.11 to 802.21



 Hi Vivek,
   We have two comments for the 802.21c PAR pending from 802.21....

5.5: Need for Project: 
     3rd sentence: "This amendment will develop protocols...." Change to "This Amendment defines..."
.              [amendments do not develop, WG do] 

.5.2 Scope: 
 2nd sentence "These enhancements will be based..." change to "These enhancements are based ..."
         .[Change to present tense as the scope should be used as if the final document, and the enhancements will have been done.] 

Regards,
Jon Rosdahl
802.11 Vice Chair

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