Comments on 8802-1, 3rd Edition
I feel our response to this ballot should be DISAPPROVE. The number of
editorial corrections and changes seem to warrant another ballot go around.
General:
If 8802-1 is to be identified as a TR, then its title should be changed
from "Specific Requirements" to "Technical Reports and Guidelines".
1) Contents --- generate a new Contents to correctly list the 4.2 items,
and to delete "Annex A".
2) 1. Scope :
- 1st par --- insert "MAC" after "48-bit", and
- 2nd par --- insert "MAC" before "technologies".
3) 2. References:
- General --- should be listed in ascending numerical order for ease
of access,
- 4th par --- delete "end",
- 8th par --- insert ":" after "Part 6",
- 9th par --- insert "sublayer? after "(MAC)"; and change "layers" to
"layer",
- 10 par --- change "8802-9" to "8802-11"; and lower case "medium
access control" and "physical layer",
- 11th par --- insert ":" after "Part 12",
- 22nd par --- lower case "group" and "addresses",
- 23rd par --- delete "end",
- 24th par --- delete "end", and
- 26th par --- change "Technology" to "technology".
4) 3. Abbreviations, FDDI --- insert "-" after "Fibre".
5) 4.2.1 CSMA/CD, 2nd par --- change "-100BASE-T" to "100BASE-T".
6) 4.2.5 Integrated Services LAN Interface, 1st par, last sentence ---
insert "network" after "FDDI".
7) 4.2.8 Fibre-Distributed Data Interface, 2nd par, 1st sentence ---
change "between the PMD and the Data Link Layer ( the MAC)" to "between the
PMD and the MAC sublayer in the Data Link Layer".
8) 4.3 Cabling Aspects, last sentence --- change "International standard"
to "International Standard".
9) 5.1 Introduction, last sentence --- change to read: "The Data Link
Layer is therefore refined to show a Medium Access Control Sublayer and a
Logical Link Control Sublayer.".
10) 6.2.2 Acknowledged Connectionless- mode Service, last sentence ---
change "No distinct definition-
---" to "no distinct MAC Service definition ---".
11) 6.4 Standard Group MAC Addresses:
- 1st sentence --- change "published Standard" to "published
International Standard",
- 1st sentence --- change "10038" to "15802-3", and
- 3rd sentence --- change " in use in Standards" to "in use in
Internatinal Standards".
12) 7.1 Provision and Support of the LLC Services:
- 1st par, 2nd sentence --- change "definition is interpersed" to
"exists",
- 1st par, last sentence --- insert "MAC" after "particular",
- 2nd par --- delete the 2nd sentence since it is covered in 5.2,
- 2nd par, last sentence --- change "from the Data Link Service
described above" to "from the OSI Data Link Service", and
- 3rd par --- end the 2nd sentence with 15802-1 by changing ";" to
".".
13) 7.1.1 LLC Type 1 Connectionless-mode Operation --- add to the end of
the 1st sentence: " in the higher layers of protocol".
14) 7.1.2 LLC Type 2 Connection-mode Operation --- in last sentence,
insert "in both directions" after "exchanged".
15) 7.1.3 LLC Type 3 Acknowledged Connectionless-mode Operation:
- 1st sentence --- delete everything between "Type 3 " and "provides",
and
- last sentence --- delete this sentence.
16) 8.1 Transparent Bridging:
- 5th par --- change "informa-tion" to "information", and
- 6th par --- if TR 11802-5 is going to be referred to, it should be
added to the References in clause 2.
17) 8.3 Source Routing Transparent Architecture --- change "10038" to
"15902-3"; and delete "/AM5 "Guidelines for Bridged LAN Source Routing
Operation by End Systems"" since AM5 is now an integral part of 8802-2.
18) Given that this is an Overview, I don't see why that info that is
provided in Annex A is being deleted . This semms like a very logical
place for information as to where the various pieces of information about
LANs can be found.
___________ . ___________